Today in our writing section I did a pick a path story in the ned mine turned out very weird but I hope you guys like it here is what my solution is.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, June 12, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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hi Raquelynn i like the way that you add videos. By Ethaniel
ReplyDeleteHey there I'm Hyacint from south hornby school.
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you made your story funny.
I was intrested to read that beutiful story.
I noticed that you loved pugs.
Did someone told you to make it.
from:Hyacint