Talofa Lava Fellow readers
Today I have finshed doing my metaphore thingy and am now doing some free writing but I thought that maybe I should do a pick a path story about a pug this time I hope you like it oh and the pugs name is sprinkles.
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Talofa Lava Fellow readers
Today I have finshed doing my metaphore thingy and am now doing some free writing but I thought that maybe I should do a pick a path story about a pug this time I hope you like it oh and the pugs name is sprinkles.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hello Raquel!
ReplyDeleteIt's Jordan Here from HHS!
I really like your pick a path about a pug Sprinkles. I remember making one of these last year for school, I made mine about homer Simpson. I also like all of the adorable images of the pugs. Maybe next time you could explain in the blog post why you choose to do it about a pug.
Well done on this amazing post, keep up the amazing work!
-Jordan (BFF)
Hey Jordan
ReplyDeleteI see that you have commented on my blog thank you for the feed back
Raquel (BFF)