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Friday, March 20, 2020

Goldilocks writing

Last week we started writing a story about goldolock this was what mine turned out in the end and make sure to comment down bellow.

In the corner of the woods there lived a little girl named Goldilocks. She lived in a small old grey bricked wooden cottage in the woods with her lovely mother.

Goldilocks had golden hair and had long curls. She was a lovely young girl who had bright blue eyes , a lovely blue dress and a white apron over her light blue dress. She was a young girl and looked as if she was 7 or 8 years old. She had an average height and she had a very bright smile.

Goldilocks is friendly and a very curious little girl. She is scared , frightened and helpful to her mum in need of help almost every day she goes into the woods and grabs some handful of blueberries and puts them into her little basket and comes home and her mum makes them a berry pie.

While she went into the woods to go and get some blueberries she would usually go and play with little bunny friends and watch the butterflies as they glided to each beautiful flower in the field which was where Goldilocks  would go and pick some berries for her and her mum.

When Goldilocks went out she noticed that her bunnie friends were not there so she got distracted and went deep into the forest and forgot about the berries. THE END 

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