Today I finshed of doing my We Will Rise Chorus I had to replace the words from the chorus We Will Rise and made my own chorus for it and I called it Reach For The Stars I hope you like it I´ll put the link to the song beneath the chorus image and I thought that the hard part of doing this was trying to go with the title and trying to make the lyrics go with the tune of the song I think that the easy part was finding some rhymes for the words at the end of each sentence and the lyrics is about you trying to fu-fill your dream and never stop untill you fu-fill your quest hope you like it BYE!
I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, December 22, 2020
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Kia ora Raquelynn,
ReplyDeleteFiona here from the SLJ team. I really like the song chorus you have written and the awesome image you chose for your background. Ka pai! Reaching for the stars and fulfilling our dreams with bravery is a great message; what you have written is very inspiring.
Do you like listening to music over the summer and singing? I love singing but I'm not very good at it. I just sing anyway (-:
Well done creating a great piece of work.
Ngā mihi nui,
Fiona (SLJ).