The conoe Paddlers

 

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Today in our writing we finished of with doing our conoe describe a momment in time something that I found that was hard was putting my writing in present tense and not in past tense because I was not careful and used a lot of ed words something that was easy was I guess writing it out and I think that the rest was all hard please make sure to comment down bellow and leave a link to your blog and I can come and comment on yours please make sure to learn some te reo for this week and to look at my writing BYE 😉😋😆.

Splash, go the  people's paddles as they shovel it into the swamp water. They can feel the vibration of the river water crashing into their mini canoes , as their canoes were wobbling in the fresh cool water . The woman in the canoe is getting disinterested so she puts her hand into the water and can feel the coolness of the water in her hand.

As they paddle forward, they can see a cluster of light that is trying to break through the dangly vines and trees .  The people describe it as the hands of God .  The light is so bright, even brighter than a light bulb. Their eyes nearly burst as they stare into it .

They quickly push their paddle in and out of the water and  end up on the other side of the swamp  pretty quickly and hear some ravens crashing down and swapping back up again into some cracks that were in trees. As they were entering the dark cloudy mist they can see some more clusters of ravens that were staring at them.

As the canoers were gliding along the damp cold swampy river they can hear some other canoers approaching them . The other canoers toss and turn as they were wobbling towards the other canoers; they both head towards the dark side of the forest and they felt a little frightened and eerie.

Te reo maori video/greetings and ferwells

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Today in Te reo Maori we finshed of our videos of saying ferwells and greetings to our budys , I was buddied up with Phoebe it was very dificult vidoeing us because I was not focusing and me and Phoebe were talking a lot , something that was very easy and not dificult to do was finishing doing it please make sure to comment down bellow.

 

Metaphors with Mrs Hodgson

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Today in writing we did mini lessons , in mini lessons we learned about Metaphors I thought that it was a little hard because I kinda did not understand anyways in the end I finished it  I thought that it was fun nd not fun in ether way I went to go and show the teachers and they said that it was amazing I hope you think that to Please make sure to comment down bellow and I will commment on yours.

Similes

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Today in writing today we had the lovely Mrs H and when we have Mrs H we do MINI LESSONS , today in mini lessons we did a Similes sheet Something that was difficult doing this was when we had to think of because I think that my mind was not awake just then Something that was not difficult was me typing OK please comment odwn bellow and make sure to check out my photo.✌👍✋

 

For and against having a mobile phone

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Today in reading we did a for and against having a mobile phone activity I liked doing it and the thing that was hard was thinking of some ideas to write down and the easy thing was typing down the ideas some of my ideas that were on my sheet were from my friends because I sort of stole the ideas because I over heard it please feel free to read what I wrote and comment down bellow in the commenting section

Persuasive writing

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This year or in the in the past few weeks we have been learning how to write some persuasive writing and opinion writng I have writon 2 To persuade writing 1 was about learning a second language and the other was about Type writers out of those 2 my favourite is Typewriters because I think that in that one I have a lot of writing . Anyways what was hard for me in the secions of doing this was doing my plan because when I did learning a second language it was a little dificult on what I would name them because they all sounded the same what was easy was doing the writing because Thanks to Miss Mcleod she told us that we should have our plan by our side Thanks Miss Mcleod and thank you readers for coming onto my blog and reading my past few posts 

Please feel free to check out my writing and comment

Everyone should have to learn a second language

Don’t you think that everyone should learn a second language? I do! 

Firstly, I think that our cummunity should learn a second language for travel. I think this because learning a second language can help your brain and it is helpful.

Secondly , in fact learning a second language is helpful to your brain because it improves the person’s IQ and the person who speaks the language will get better and better  and that is how it improves the person’s language because they try and try and it will be improved , also It can help with your memory abilities  .

Finally, speaking another language can help you when you go to another country. You could use what you learned , also learning this can help others because if you know the language really well you could teach another person how to speak  the language if they want to speak it.

In Conclusion ,  it is without a doubt kind of necessary that everyone should learn how to speak another language because it can help with travel or knowledge and most of all you could improve this by teaching other people or just keep on learning . 

So now do you think that speaking another language is good for you? 

To inform about Typewriters

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Today in Writing I managed to finish my to inform Typewriters I really enjoyed doing and I would kinda like to do the other options like a spinning top , americain dolls and some peg dolls but I would rather do the peg dolls then the american dolls because they are a little creepy but andyways here is my writing about Typewriters 

 Old Fashioned Typewriters

Introduction

Do you know what typewriters were used for?

Typewriters were used to solve some peoples problems with them writing some words onto a piece of paper because sometime when they would write there hand would sometimes get tired and that is why in the before some authors like J.K Rowling used the typewriters.

Appearance

The appearance of a typewriter is that it has a paper on top and one the bottom it has some keys that you can type on and the typewriter will automatically print the letter that you tipped onto the piece of paper , the typewriter is similar to a computer but does not need  electricity to work. 

First made

Typewriters were first made in  1868 , In 1868 American inventor Christiphore Lamthan Sholes  developed the machine that finally succeeded on the market as the Remington and established the modern idea of the Typewriter.

Why they were made

Typewriters were made so then it is easier for us humans to write without our hands getting tired and without us having to sharpen our pencil again so then you could finish writing , people also use these things because they can write faster on it and slower on it .

Conclusion

Maybe in the future people might upgrade the type writers and use different materials to make it .  Who knows anyways it's not like we can see into the future or can we ?